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Ben Newman ([personal profile] bnewman) wrote2011-07-05 07:53 am
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Revenge is a dish best served with honey

(being a tempting taste of a Harry Potter fanfic currently under construction, based on an idea developed by [livejournal.com profile] orawnzva, [livejournal.com profile] fiddledragon, and [livejournal.com profile] batshua)

Hogwarts, two years before Harry Potter's return, sorting day:

"Sly... no, wait..." I could feel the hat searching my mind, my heart, tasting me. "Your desire for power is great, but your heart is as sweet as your name, Melissa."

The whole school held its breath.

"HUFFLEPUFF!"

The Slytherins gasped. The Hufflepuffs murmured in distress. And then time stopped. I saw my father — what was my father doing there?! — speaking harshly with Professor Snape, but everyone and everything else was frozen. When he had finished with Snape, father turned to the assembled students and raised his wand. His anger was terrifying. I still don't know what kind of spell he cast — was it a memory charm, a compulsion, a curse? "This never happened!" he cried, actually losing his composure as I had never once seen him do in public. Finally, almost as an afterthought, he turned to me. "You are no daughter of mine!" And then he vanished.

Time resumed. The Hufflepuffs cheered, all but one, an older student with brightly colored hair, who made no sound but whose eyes fixed me with an almost frightening look of grim, protective determination. The Slytherins seemed unperturbed. And I would later discover that most students would thereafter claim not to have clearly heard the name by which I was called up to be sorted.

Very well, father. A Hufflepuff stands for loyalty, and you have betrayed me, while I have merely been myself. As you have renounced me, I renounce you, and your name, and your bad faith. From this day forward I will be a honey-fairy princess, all sweetness and light. I will put on yellow and black stripes. I will make real friends, loyal, warm-hearted, and true. I will enjoy my classes. I will bake cookies. And I will wait, patiently, for the day when I can summon my loyal friends to my side to swarm and destroy you. For remember that the honeybee fills its hive not only with sweetness and light, but with venom.

— Melissa Melfée
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[personal profile] sheistheweather 2011-07-05 07:57 pm (UTC)(link)
This is amazing. :D I like it a lot, and am inclined to illustrate it.

[identity profile] tovaks.livejournal.com 2011-07-05 08:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Like! :-D
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[identity profile] thnidu.livejournal.com 2011-07-06 03:56 am (UTC)(link)
Woo-hoo!

[identity profile] orawnzva.livejournal.com 2011-07-06 01:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Do you like the name-switch there?

[identity profile] aryky.livejournal.com 2011-07-07 01:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Definitely hoping for more of this. I happen to have been reading some HP fanfic lately, who knows why, and would definitely be interested in more!

Late to the party

[identity profile] almeda.livejournal.com 2011-11-07 03:19 am (UTC)(link)
... because I haven't been reading ANYONE's lj for a while. But I like it.